Would anyone in here be willing to give an honest critique of a screenplay, adapted from a short story?
I write audio drama scripts all the time, but I've never actually written a screenplay for film.
@breathandbone
June 1, 2026
Honest critique?
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@attilakissczirakiJun 1I like writing screenplay too brother! I won't be able to guarantee really fast response but I'd certainly like to look at it. How long is it?
@breathandboneJun 1It is 13 1/2 pages double space. Would you want to look at the shirt story too? That might give a better idea of where it goes. Im only at the very beginning of drafts for it, so even if you want to team up to co-author the screenplay, id be down for that as well.
@misericordiaJun 2Sure, send it to me if you want
@breathandboneJun 3I sent you a dm.
